My brain snuck-up and captured a violent
Frenzy of subterranean chromy
perceptions, squirming-forced, feared in silent
protests among the few who despise filthy
incomprehensible dilemmas --shame
arriving to my inner depth--driven
by undeniable fury built blurry
Until the wake revealed my chosen
Break from the unsuspecting bland limits
caressing me in a hark embrace--pain
fumbled and went, arose, and fell deeply
onto phantasm insights with frequent
pushes to empower enlightenment
By Deborah Godinez 2011 ©
probably my favorite so far
ReplyDeletethank-you... you seem to like the stuff I put effort into... this actually only took 16 minutes... but the effort was finding the nouns and adjectives that appropriately fit my mood and captured what i was trying to convey... AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. POETRY... nothing like poetry!
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